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Lily took on a memorable and unique topic.
Her writing style was personal and inviting.
While she had a strong start there were several areas to focus and improve the result.
Although this is an abbreviated look at the process, Lily responded to the feedback with a very strong essay.
Her story paints a picture for the admissions office about her passion for dance, how that led to discovery of a new passion, her interest in the lives of others, taking action, and following a unique path.
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