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The Tango

Lily took on a memorable and unique topic.


Her writing style was personal and inviting.  


While she had a strong start there were several areas to focus and improve the result.


Although this is an abbreviated look at the process, Lily responded to the feedback with a very strong essay.  


Her story paints a picture for the admissions office about her passion for dance, how that led to discovery of a new passion, her interest in the lives of others, taking action, and following a unique path.  


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